Great Weekend Journal Writing by Mrs Owen

Hi A1.  I have enjoyed reading your weekend journal entries from 'Queen's Birthday Weekend as well as the Noho Marae that some of you went to.  However many of your pieces of writing needed a lot of editing as they did not make sense or did not have capital letters and fullstops in the right places.  Could you please read over your work before you save it next time so that I can see you have made an effort to edit it. Keep up the good work.
Mrs Owen

Friday Night Horror by Ethan Clover

On Friday night I saw a white car speed then spin out into a ditch. I thought he will crash. Now that is not the end of the story, the same car looked stolen. I did not get the number plate.

My Weekend By Kataraina

In the weekend I stayed at church. Alicia stayed at church and my friends stayed at church too. What we did was play some games. We played 'Pick up Sticks' and then we went to watch a movie. Then we went to bed. On Sunday we played some more games and the game we played was 'Snakes and Ladders'. Soon it was time to go home.

In the Weekend by Nahkel

On Sunday 5th June I went to Auckland to watch the Warriors v's Storms game. We had a banner. I don't know what it said on it. My sister Kitana and I went to get some chips and sauce. We were going to get a drink but the shop was closed. When the game finished I was so glad. We walked down the stairs and then we saw the popcorn shop. We got the sugary popcorn but we wanted the salted popcorn. Then we went in the car. We stopped at a cafe  and we saw Mr Picken. He had been to the game as well.  

At the Pool by Arama

My friend Ben and I went  to the pools.  We had to get dressed into our togs and we had a swim in the pool.                                                 

My Weekend by Keaton

My weekend was a four day weekend because of the Queen's Birthday celebrations. We went to town  and my dad got me a new rugby ball, my sister got two new pairs of shoes and nothing for my little brother. When we got home we just played with the rugby ball.
By Keaton

Awesome Holiday by Jayden

On Queen Birthday I went hunting with my dad. I cut myself with the knife on accidenet and I was crying then my dad put a plaster over my hand. Then we caught a deer with my dads gun and went home. It took a long time to get home because we were at Auckland. When finally got home I had a sleep. In the morning my dad woke me up to go to my aunty's. She said, "You look sleepy." My cousin was playing 'Blackcops'. I played with him until we went home. On Monday I  played 'Bullrush' outside with these kids then I went home.
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