Hi A1. I have enjoyed reading your weekend journal entries from 'Queen's Birthday Weekend as well as the Noho Marae that some of you went to. However many of your pieces of writing needed a lot of editing as they did not make sense or did not have capital letters and fullstops in the right places. Could you please read over your work before you save it next time so that I can see you have made an effort to edit it. Keep up the good work.
Mrs Owen
Mrs Owen
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