My holiday was so awesome I went iceskating. I went to a party with my mum and sister it was so awesome because we went iceskating. Well first my sister and I didn't know how to iceskate but when I let go of the railing, I found out I did know how to iceskate. I saw heaps of people there- Natalie,Erei and heaps more. I also went to the cinemas with Erei and my sister. We went to watch 'Brave', it was pretty funny and weird too. Oh! and I had a funday at Wendys with my sister. I had a jellybean fundae. I was going to get the cookies and cream fundae but my sister got that one. We went to Wendy's near Central Mall.
Sunday, July 22, 2012
My holiday in Ohakune!!! By Keaton
On the 12th of July I travelled to Ohakune to go snowboarding with my family on Mount Ruapehu. My sister and mum skied; my dad , my brother and I went snowboarding. I was good because I snowboarded last year.
We went for two days.Then on Saturday my family and I went rock climbing. I really enjoyed my holiday it was awesome. By Keaton
Tuesday, July 17, 2012
Saturday, June 16, 2012
Great Weekend Journal Writing by Mrs Owen
Hi A1. I have enjoyed reading your weekend journal entries from 'Queen's Birthday Weekend as well as the Noho Marae that some of you went to. However many of your pieces of writing needed a lot of editing as they did not make sense or did not have capital letters and fullstops in the right places. Could you please read over your work before you save it next time so that I can see you have made an effort to edit it. Keep up the good work.
Mrs Owen
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